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Elfpack Daily Poem Submissions 6

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[Hiei's Girl]
Beyond

The world we see
We may live in for eternity
Gray of life
Full of hate
Saddened tears
Riddled with fears
Science rules our life
Or...so they say

Just look beyond
You'll find the place
Were fantasy and sci-fi
Are your fate

Were magic
Is the understanding for life
Your imagination rules your life
Secrets hidden
Behind your face
Become revealed in this place

Walk on a cloud
Fly in the sky
Live that life
You'll never cry

-Written in December 2004




[Shiver]
Killers 'n' Sinners
  The Devils

They're coming in the night
When you arranged your demons to fight
To other dimensions they let you fly
Watching you inconspicuous
Waiting for being lovely vicious
To brake your souls licious

You act the way you go
Hide that your blood can flow
For pleasure you hurt yourself slow
the answers are written in the steam
Like something you only see an the screen.

Snow covers the ground
Time is something you can't count
You loose control
The fear makes you shout it out loud
Firewater makes you crawl
That makes sure that you don't fall

You go out in the dark
It drives you to the grind
While you loose logic in a park
A flash built up your mind
And the hells hound start to bark

So cold you wake up from your grave
Seductive lust calls you damned name
You've lost everything faith
It's time to play a little game
Standing up to stand brave
Something makes you craving for pain.

Rip out her minds and regs
Penetrate her gently in blood
It becomes a ritual instead of sex
Then you feel so wired cut
You want perverted games of wax

In the nights slowly way
He comes down on earth
And orders you hierarchic to pray
You tell him about your birth
That's what you needed to say
You ain't got the nerve

Nothing can stop you
Running with his head
It's something like a cloud
You felt him as a dread
You establish your crew

Devils may hide in the shadows
Take you in the nights sun
Coming from bellows
We want to have some fun
Showing you the death Othello's
For your life you have to run




[Laín]
Haunted

She's clawing at my breast from deep inside. Scratching deep soars in my flesh.
She's screaming out loud in protest, and fills my head with her endless echoes of pain.
With a grim smile she sinks her hands in my heart and our blood becomes one.
Her longing fills my body with lust. I'm taken over, I'm longing, reaching, waiting...
Soon. Soon I wont be able to defeat her anymore, my strength will run dry. She hates being trapped,
it hurts..
it kills.




[..majo..]
Your love

Your lovely eyes
Your sweet smile
I can’t seem to remember them after a while

All I remember
Are all the sweet words you said
When you lay next to me in your bed

I tremble with every word
Every time I feel you lips
Or a touch by your fingertips

I need you, I want you, I love you
And I hope you feel the same
I hope you’re not playing a game

When it’s time for me to go
You beg me “Please stay”
But honey, I’ll never be far away

I’ll always be in your heart
Just hold me close, one more time
And let me end this silly rhyme




[Jinkx313]
Losing Us

It was early January and my worries were clear
The air was full of winter cheer

We sat together beside the fire
Little did I know, goings on would soon be dire

Soon it was June and the heat was intense
I found you hiding and your silence was dense

It was late August when I first saw you cry
I held you close but your tears did not dry

Halloween passed and you were still sad
I knew you had been fighting with your mom and step-dad

November passed in a rush of concern
Silence and solace you soon started to yearn

It was Christmas Day when I got the news
I saw you in hospital, cut, broken and bruised

You had felt that your life was a mess
Full of pain, neglect, depression and stress

A bridge you were on and a knife you had found
It was a jogger who saw you, lying motionless on the ground

Two months you spent not getting better 
The news of you death came to me in a letter

You were my love, my hope and my joy
Now you are gone, and you were just a young boy

I miss you so much my life is destroyed
All that is left is an empty void

I hold the gun up to my head
I think ‘why not?’ and use the knife instead

Now you are gone, as am I
We leave those behind wondering why

Two young lives were lost that night
And the moonlight glints off our gravestones shining pearly white…

- May 06, 2005




[Tear]
My Fallen Angel

You sit by a window watching the rain
You think you must be going insane
You see a flash
A bolt of light
And then you hear the sound
Of something hitting the ground

You run to the door to see what it is
But what you see
You can't believe
A winged figure
Laying still on the ground

This fallen angel
Has come to you
Now and forever
To help you through

Because this angel fell in love
With a demon from far below
A demon who has now bestowed
Upon this angel to live here on earth
To have his child
To give it birth
To give it life
His own flesh and blood
His own living child
And the angel he loves

But now this angel is deadly depressed
And madly obsessed
With finding a way
To get back home
So she won't be
Quite so alone...

- (c) Copyright Allen Karl Wong, Jr. Young poets Society 2003 all rights reserved.




[apocalypse7]
The Rosebush

The rosebush hides the sun,
as my soul has done for me,
I wish to tell her,
how I really feel and wish for her,
to be with me,
so I hold back my inner feelings,
locked so far away in my soul,
as my mind conjures,
thoughts of my wish,
which shall never come true,
unless I hurt or enlighten myself.

Fear,
the no,
no one wants it,
I feel the rose bush prick
the sun bleeding fore evermore,
holes to many already,
ten bleeding without ceasing,
so it will heal,
or another thorn goes in,
the most beautiful rose yet,
as the sun sets,
it feels the fear and darkness overcome it,
no knowing,
whether to share it's light,
once again,
with that beautiful rose,
and feel the perfect harmony again.




[Dragonix]
Chocolate Dreams

Such lovely scenery
Such deep mystery
Such a fucking fantasy

Frightening tears
That dwells inside
Deepened worries
Left to die

Softly spoken whispers
Chocolate covered hearts
Little girl that’s dreaming
Soul that’s torn apart

Smile now girl
And rip them open
Take their lives
With no regret

Bring them home
And take their heart
To your sweetened chocolate dreams
Where you fully tear apart.

- © Dragonix




[Gwendylyyn]
Trapped Within My Mind

I walk along these lonely streets,
Trapped here in my mind.
I've created my own prison,
Here within my mundane bind.

My soul cannot be freed,
And even as I sit here crying,
I know the world around me,
The world out there, is dying.

My mind wanders,
And my heart bleeds.
My existence renders,
All others to scream.

I curl up in my bed,
wrapped tight within the sheets.
My sister walks into the room,
And her scream echoes through me,
From my head down to my feet.

She's seen the bright red color,
Of the sheets wrapped tight around me.
She runs into the living room,
My death has taken its fee.

I can hear my mother screaming,
my sister out there crying,
knowing there's nothing they can do,
as I lay in my bed dying.

I think about the past,
here in my last moments;
It all flies by so fast,
And now I lay here with my torments.

My world slips away,
and I no longer hear them.
My thoughts begin to sway,
as I lay stuck here in my prison.

Even in death, they won't let me be.
I wish these thoughts were never mine;
And now I'm trapped here in my bind;
Trapped within my mind.

- (c) [Gwendylyyn] 11.10.04




[Stefano]
Less than nothing

Under the guise of friendship
he asked to meet.
With the pretense of empathy
did he lure me.
Feeling the need of understanding
I met him,
learned to trust him,
even to open my heart to him.
Then with the cold blade of carelessness
did he wound me.

And now I fear myself closing off,
becoming more calloused,
more fearful.

How I miss the innocence of my youth,
and the freedom with which I once faced the world.

Now there is only rain,
and bitter winds,
emptiness,
and the sense of being less
than nothing.




[Pyromaniac]
Valentine's Day

Valentines Day,
Is filled with love,
With all the hearts,
And the doves,

Valentines Day,
Nothings the same,
There are no tears,
And no pain,

Valentines Day,
I feel fresh and new,
'Cause on this day,
All I want is you




[Razberri]
Risen

A light beams down on her
The shadows slowly turn
Her heart racing once again
As her feelings begin to burn

Intoxicatingly beautiful
She races to find the end
But all she sees is that man
Who woke her once again

He loved her heart and body
Kept her warm and still
As she rocked back and forth
Holding images she longed to feel

Gave up the hurt and pain inside
To look for words to say
How she felt towards this man
Her every waking day.




[JoeysMonkey]
Me

As my flesh is ripped from the bone,
I wonder how I ended up being so alone...

They rip my tongue out so I can scream,
it slightly feels as if I'm in a hellish dream...

They throw my body in a pit,
and laugh as the match is lit...

The smell of burning flesh fills the night,
so wrong yet so right...

As I lie in my ash filled grave,
the road to hell I have paved...

For my killers were not foe but friend,
I wanted to die young never to reach the end...

For the pain was to great ,
there was no going back,
it was simply to late...

So as they push the dirt over me,
I hope everyone will forget all that I was,
and all that I was supposed to be...

Soon to forget the worst thing of all,
soon to forget,

Me...

- Written November 2004




[Star]
Untitled

I'm like a window
The glass is my heart
the wood is my
friends and family
holding me up
If I fall all is gone
but I will not
because my friends and family
will be there for me.




[Elisa]
My missing piece

The sun slowly rising, that is my heart burning.
The clear running water, that is my unselfishness.
The pure air, that is my need to live.

Like music you charm the sun to turn night into day.
With love you fill me with desire to endless give.
And your soul, is the missing piece that makes me whole.

You my love, are my sun.
You my love, are the clear water running through my veins to purify my soul.
You, are the air I breath to stand strong.

By looking into your eyes, you wash away my pain.
Your voice makes me calm.
And when you take me into your arms, safety fills my soul.

Surroundings disappear as you fill me with your love.
Loneliness is no more.
So to you my angel I give; my heart, my mind, my body and my soul.

- © Malin Persson 04-01-30

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2007-06-06 [Faith.Hope.Love]: The poems seem to be posted in many different ways. :P

2007-06-07 [Bookwyrm]: How so? Some don't post dates, but that seems to be the only real difference...Though I do see a few people put line breaks here and there where others don't...which I can fix real quick. :)

2007-06-07 [GlitchGames]: so whatcha think of my poem?

2007-06-12 [Faith.Hope.Love]: I like your poem, [GlitchGames]. I like poems that have a message that makes us think. :)  [Bookwyrm], maybe I'm so accustomed to the strict format adherence required on ET with their Daily Poem. :P

2007-06-12 [Bookwyrm]: XD I don't have any jobs on ET, much less a poem-related job...they don't seem to like me much there. XD Won't even accept my graphics there, even though I went through all the trouble of uploading them all to ET...Anyway, if I've ever seen their format, it's only been once or twice and I don't remember it. XD We're not as strict here...

2007-06-13 [Faith.Hope.Love]: Hmmm...I'm sorry about that. Elftown is like my home online. I can't complain for I've had very little, if any difficulty with anyone there or here for that matter. I've noticed that things aren't as strict here, but it's not a bad thing. lol I looked at your graphics on ET & left a comment. I have to agree with [Zab]. I noticed that you remarked about your unhappiness regarding the gif format. I left a comment on your graphics page about png's that you might want to try if you aren't aware of them already. Anything I learn, I like to share with others gladly. I don't get over here to Elfpack as often as I'd like to. I do a lot of things on Elf12, so I'm there almost all the time.  :D Congratulations on your recent wedding! :D

2007-06-13 [Bookwyrm]: Elftown is where I started, and then I migrated to Elfpack...now I try and make time for both of them, though there's no denying my jobs are more demanding here than there. XD Thanks for the advice and the congratulations. ^_^ I know about PNGs, but I've been having trouble with that format and transparency.

2007-06-13 [Faith.Hope.Love]: *nods* My offer stands as I stated on ET. I understand, b/c I do mega, mega amount of tasks on Elf12, but I enjoy helping out & doing things for the kids. :D

2007-06-13 [Bookwyrm]: I never even joined Elf12...I considered it, because I wanted to help out there as well, but I thought with my tasks here and then certain wikis of mine that demand a lot of attention...I didn't want to spread myself too thin. I do appreciate your offer. ^_^ And thank you for it. ^_^

2007-06-18 [Faith.Hope.Love]: ...And you're welcome! :D I understand "spreading oneself too thinly". It always seems that I have way too many irons in the fire all at the same time. However, I'd much rather be busy than bored! :D

2007-06-18 [Bookwyrm]: XD Good point! I just don't want to work myself to the bone. I ended up taking a "break" from Elfpack for a while, and now I feel a bit guilty because a lot of work didn't get done. XD I'm back though...yay!

2007-06-27 [Faith.Hope.Love]: Same here with Elf12. If I miss a couple of days & go back, I never see much getting done that needs doing, but we are entitled to a life, too. :P

2007-06-27 [Bookwyrm]: -giggles- True, we are. And sometimes there are outside circumstances that are more important than the internet. -dodges a pack of angry elves- Eep!

2007-06-30 [Bookwyrm]: [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Thank you for your submission. ^_^ Next time, though, please add your name to your submission so that we know who submitted it. Also, please either use the italics tags to set off the title of your poem, or place a ">" at the beginning of your title so it will be italicized.

2007-07-01 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Oh alright, sorry. =D

2007-07-01 [Bookwyrm]: Perfectly all right. ^_^ I'm about to try and revise the rules page so that I can keep things more organized and hopefully get everything fixed the way it should be. I have to get the go-ahead of some "higher-ups" though. :P

2007-07-01 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Yeah that's understandable. Is it alright that I put one of the poems I have already submitted to the regular elfpack poetry on here?

2007-07-02 [Bookwyrm]: Yes, but you can't add another poem for a month. It just gives others a chance to add their stuff, I'm sure you understand. ^_^ Also, it only counts as one poem to your count, of course. :)

2007-07-02 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Lol yeah I figured that. =D

2007-07-16 [Bookwyrm]: Please don't delete the bottom of the page when adding your poem. It deletes the links to other pages. ^_^ Thank you!

2007-07-30 [dragonus]: I added my last poem so far was made qwite reacently yea it's a wierd one I wrote it while listening to music and looking at my tv while it was off. The word's just started to flow so I had to write it down. Hope you all like it.

2007-07-30 [GlitchGames]: *sighs*mines still at tha top waiting

2007-07-30 [Bookwyrm]: It's lovely [dragonus]. ^_^

Well, not every poem will be featured [GlitchGames]. ^-^ There are lots of poems to choose from, but we're always looking for more, so keep writing! ^_^

2007-07-31 [GlitchGames]: i kno [Bookwyrm]...im jus sayin

2007-07-31 [dragonus]: Thank you [Bookwyrm]. To me it sound's like a spell more than a normal poem what do you think or isd it just me that sees it?

2007-07-31 [Bookwyrm]: I think it is what you feel it is. That's what's most important, anyway.

2007-07-31 [GlitchGames]: yup...that how i feel

2007-08-01 [dragonus]: Good point ok I will believe it is a poem that way it can't be activated if it was a spell thank's for the advice :)

2007-08-01 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: why cant it be both?

2007-08-01 [GlitchGames]: lol..i dunno

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: because if you know anything in the religion of the craft if I believed in it as a spell then it would activate and just by the sound of it what do you think will happen.

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: by the sounds of it, that does not seem as if it would be a bad thing.

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: wel here is an idea it my knolage and power continue to grow times 3 each day what do you think I would become in 1 year

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: knowledge is not power, it is freedom from the binds of ignorance. power, if used correctly and focused, can lead to a great helping of others for betterment. therefore, if handled properly, i see no reason why there would be a negetive aspect to the "poem".

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: I see your point ok then as is written and believed upon shal now take it's ritefull place amongst many here I decree hence forth from this day forth shal this be awakend and cast to yeild upon bringing greater good

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: *smiles and leans back*

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: wow ok that is faster than any other cool feeling

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: remember, with more power comes more responsibilities...its never a free ride.

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: yes I am aware of that will great power comes great responsability

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: HA! SPIDERMAN QUOTE!!!!!!

2007-08-02 [GlitchGames]: spiderman is overrated...now rises ARACHNIDUDE*runs away and comes back dressed like a giant spider*

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: cyinide and happiness!

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: Actualy that quote dates back to the medevil ages way before spiderman came out hell before electricity for that matter it was written upon a scroll.

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: you know what, go have a brain fart smartypants *sticks tongue out and laughs*

2007-08-02 [GlitchGames]: dont b mean

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: im not!

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: tisk tisk tisk need not thoa word's speak nice tis be what twas spoken so many moon's past thee speek in old tongue speak thyne well of thee truth mayest be.

2007-08-02 [GlitchGames]: times have changed..speak new tounge

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: old english, yeah....but you'd only go unnoticed in a shakespearian theatre...any where else people would look at you like you were insane

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: well who said I wasen't lol all the sane people are lock up in those insane asilom's and all the insane people are roaming free like a bird like me.

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: sanity is a comparement to the "normal", well, who's to say whats normal, i think there is no such thing!!!

2007-08-02 [GlitchGames]: i kno whatcha mean...normal is 2 hard 2 explain

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: I know what you meen by that it is as if trying to explane the meening of life that only applies to you as you are and saying it is the real answer to everyone but that is false for everybody's path is differant so is the meening of life to them for one meening dose not apply to another only for that person so tryinbg to say all is one answer is like saying one person is normal and only if you are exactly like that person can you be normal so there is realy no true answer to either one but million's of answer's to all.

2007-08-02 [GlitchGames]: blah blah blah blah blah

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: you say blah blah blah but you know exactly what i'm saying RKO

2007-08-02 [GlitchGames]: i didnt even read it

2007-08-02 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: as children we are stressed that everyone is different and unique...therefore there can be no normal!

2007-08-02 [dragonus]: if you did read it then you would know and if you haden't then don't bother it maybe to hard for your mind to comprahend

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: lol...im jus 2 bored 2 read all that

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: see [Lyon Armonial the healer] know's what I am saying

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: see as I wrote we are differant when your bored you try to annoy or anger someone by provokeing them me I read and studie the old way's

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: with an IQ of 160, i would definately hope so...hehe...i undermeant what you stood.

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: hahaha lmao you did that deliberatly undermeant and stood switch understand and meant lol

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: well understood lol ok so even I messed up

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: you got me laughing to much messed up the word lol

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: im lost

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: my family does it all the time (unintentionally) we're a bunch of blond pollocks!

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: lmao [GlitchGames] how did you get lost did the word's streamline passed you or are you confused as to why I laughed

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: LOOK AT ALL THESE IDIOTS, LOOK AT ALL THESE BOOBS!!

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: Have you gone loco on me over there ??? lol

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: yo estoy loco en de cabesa!

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: haha me hoblah englace

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: well, good for you, tu valde immodus.

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: Me no hoblah esponal

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: i hate spainish

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: not spanish...latin

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: that's ok I know nothing in spanish exept for vulgar language lol

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: well either way...im english...speak ur language

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: you know, enlish is not the only language on earth...

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: but it is tha best

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: bullshit!!!

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: well its ll a matter of opinion

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: exactly, you cant say english is the best then.

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: well french is the language of love

2007-08-03 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: and italiano

2007-08-03 [Bookwyrm]: ^_^ Everything is relative. I agree with that.

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: honestly to be honest all languages have there significant's therefor all languages are the best for at least one or two people I speak english but my fave. language's are aztec egyption, pectiwiccan, and saex wiccan they are the best to me so you see even if your english it dosen't meen your best language is that.

2007-08-03 [Bookwyrm]: Exactly. Everything is relative. All that matters is what it means to you. :P

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: yup :)

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: well...i can say english is my fav and nothin u do or say can change that

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: that is your choice

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: yep...and i can also say japan is the greatist place n terms of electronics

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: honestly I would have to agree with you there but as I said before to each his or her own

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: im gonna learn japanese and move there

2007-08-03 [dragonus]: sound's cool it wont be easy but I heard if you moved there and spent all the time around people speaking that language in about 2 to 3 weeks you pick up and understand that language with ease

2007-08-03 [GlitchGames]: thats cool

2007-08-05 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Can't I put a new one up now?

2007-08-06 [Bookwyrm]: Yes. ^_^

2007-08-15 [Bookwyrm]: Hmm...what do you guys think of a monthly/weekly/twice a month theme or something of that sort? Something to promote the writing of poetry, and different types of poetry. So much of the poetry held in these pages are...well, the same type of poetry, the same subjects. Essentially, they are the same. Not that they aren't good, but it doesn't really make me happy having to put a poem up on mainstuff that is essentially the same as the previous week's poem.

2007-08-15 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: I think it's a good idea.

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: Mmm...yes...I think I'll implement that soon. ^_^

2007-08-16 [GlitchGames]: well i have various poetry but i perfer 2 show my luv poetry.i can write dark,1s about tha past,ect...

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: Well, people will still be able to submit any type of poetry they want, however I would like to implement a theme to give people new ideas. Since there are so little submissions these days, the featured poem only changes once every two weeks. So with the current rate, we would have one non-theme poem featured and one theme poem featured each month. If the submission rate picks up, the featured poem may change each week, but I have a feeling it may not get that high again. Most people don't seem interested unfortunately.

2007-08-16 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: *sticks my tongue out* i submitted a lot of poems, so na!

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: Yes, a lot of people have, but still...no one can say that there aren't fewer submissions these days.

2007-08-16 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: so go through older ones!

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: I have been! But it would be EXTREMELY wonderful if we had more submissions. ^_^ I'd like to feature more members who are active. The past two featured poems came from currently inactive members, but the poems were beautiful so I featured them anyway.

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: well if it help's bring out other's muses to create emotion's and vision's through there poetry. I think it would be a good idea to make a theme for them and if you do it may bring other's in not just to see what's happening but may just let them start to think like a poet and create there own poem's to add so we get more in here. So I say go for it.

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: -nods- Agreed. I'll start the new plan soon. ^_^

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: Cool but can I make a suggestion try to make it something that will make even the greatest poet's think makeing them dig deep into there syche to find the word's to best express it.

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: ...It's a theme...it's not going to be something like "Write a poem about your best idea on how to fix the world." It's going to be simple like "nature" or "birthday" or something that's just different from what we normally get. Some will be deeper than others, but I'm not going to make it impossible. I actually want members to participate. Many members, not just the two who are willing to think that deeply. XD I do see what you mean, but I'm not going to make them work so hard that they don't want to do it.

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: Yea maybe that would be best because if they came in to check it out and had no idea as to what to even start with then they woulden't even particapate.

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: Precisely. Unfortunately, the Elfpack members aren't typically on the same level as Elftown members. Not that they are less intelligent, but Elfpack is mostly "Elftown Rejects." They may have creativity, but they're not going to stress themselves to participate. So while I don't want to make it easy for them, I want to make it easier.

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: Basicaly instaed of just putting a rock in front of them to come up with what makes it beautiful to you,Your giving them a flower and asking them what do you feel when you look at it. Kinda

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: In a sense, yes. ^_^

2007-08-18 [GlitchGames]: well i can make a poem on ne theme so i like that idea :D

2007-08-19 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Mine are all depressing kind of, but I always welcome a challenge. =D

2007-08-19 [GlitchGames]: yep i luv challenges and writin a poem of a diff type weekly sounds fun 2 me

2007-08-19 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: You and me both.

2007-08-19 [GlitchGames]: yep :P

2007-08-19 [Bookwyrm]: Well, it's not going to be weekly, I don't think. I'm thinking of changing the "monthly submission" rule though, since we get so few submissions anyway.

2007-08-19 [GlitchGames]: still works jus as good 4 me

2007-08-20 [dragonus]: Though I am not perfect or even nearly the best at it but when it comes to challanges I alway's jump in head first (Never quite never give up see it through to the end) that is my motto my crede

2007-08-20 [GlitchGames]: well i jus find that a challenge gives me a chance 2 acess my potential but iv never found nething i cant do w/ ease so iv never had 2 push myself that hard.maybe a new monthyly poem based on wat this competition will help me out by changing my style and keep me constantly thinkin and finally push me 2 acess my potential

2007-08-21 [dragonus]: yea that is the spirit just push past all mind block's and access all potential buried deep within one's self

2007-08-21 [GlitchGames]: well thats hard 4 me

2007-08-22 [dragonus]: not realy [GlitchGames] just clear your mind of all thaught and consintrate on what you wish to acomplish and soly focus on that one thing

2007-08-22 [GlitchGames]: no i mean i have A LOT of potential.its gonna b hard 2 choose a catigory that i have 2 use very much on

2007-08-22 [dragonus]: maybe so but that is the fun of it find wich one best sootes it and work with that one

2007-08-22 [GlitchGames]: yea.i'll have 1 ,atching tha catigory within 1 week of notice of a new 1

2007-10-07 [Kaos101]: Will I be told if my poem is chosen?

2007-10-07 [Bookwyrm]: Yes.

2007-10-07 [Kaos101]: sweet

2007-10-07 [GlitchGames]: im still waitin 4 mine

2007-10-07 [Bookwyrm]: Well...not everyone has their poem chosen. If they did, it wouldn't make the featured poems very special...x_X

2007-10-08 [GlitchGames]: yea i kno but i can still wait

2007-11-10 [Bookwyrm]: This page is closed to submissions, all new poetry can be submitted on Elfpack Daily Poem Submissions 7. :D Don't worry, I'm still picking poems from this page and previous pages as well, just trying to cut the length of the pages down some.

2008-01-18 [GlitchGames]: wer did mine go?

2008-01-18 [Bookwyrm]: -pokes- Notice that there are now 22 submission pages. XD I spread them out so there are fewer poems on each page...easier for me to look through, really. Your poem is probably on page 22 now. :D

2008-01-18 [GlitchGames]: holy hell

2008-01-18 [Bookwyrm]: There are 15 poems per page, rather than...50...XD Or however many poems there were. I may condense them again to make fewer pages, but it's unlikely.

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